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sister screamed and I didn’t know why. I went to go check on her and she was screaming in her bedroom. I said WHAT IS WRONG! She did not answer. But where did it go she shouted? I said were did what go.
My teddy bear has gone missing. Were do you think it went. I DON’T KNOW she said. We will find it besides you have heaps of other ones. But it was my favourite one. Just calm down and we will find it. Lets go tell my mum and dad they will find it.
TO BE CONTINUED!
Greetings from Western Australia Cooper. Writing about a lost teddy is an experience to which many adults,and children, can relate. I suggest that you edit for punctuation before you publish. For this text, it is really important to use speech marks so your reader can keep track of which character is speaking. A good strategy is to read your text aloud so you can hear where punctuation should be, or ask a friend to help you. 😊
Hi Cooper, well done on your piece for the 100 word challenge. Something I really liked about your story was when the teddy bear went missing. Overall I loved your story from Cody.